i am curious about the story, but i feel like some aspects were lost in translation and certain bits are still confusing. the art rework is great, everyone's design improved a lot.
however, i feel like the UI and scrolling feel a bit dated (especially for 2025 and compared to other similar VNs). the english translation could also be better (grammatical errors or weird formulations, etc.). i am aware you must've put a lot of effort into this project, so please don't take my feedback personally. best wishes to you!