I haven't submitted a game, so a review comment is the best I can do.
I thought that, for what it set out to be, the game comes off as polished and complete. Its evident that you had fun with the paperwork, despite the overall game still maintaining its seriousness and intensity; the music, artwork, and dialogue all work well to create the intended atmosphere.
I really enjoyed much of this game, from its application of the theme (though it admittedly strays off a bit) to the humour and quality of the game. I can see it only accentuated by length— the story itself feels unnaturally cut off— with more story and buildup, this game would be a real pleasure to experience.
Regardless, congrats on the achievement, I really enjoyed this :)