Yes... I have an unhealthy appreciation for villains I fear. lol
The last really good game I played was a game where I dated a bat-crap-crazy serial killer. He was very sweet. ^_^
(Once he got over his need to kill you anyho'....)
Killer Chat or something.
And I see.... The writing often trails off into something incredibly comedic, so I assumed it was on purpose.
If that was unintentional, I apologize and point you at Brandon McNulty's YouTube chanal, if you want to improve your writing.
And it's not the characters that was boring --they were interesting.
It was the delivery of the information about the human one that was a bit boring.
I figured any dedicated writer would want to know how to improve their story. ^_^