made an account just to say that this is possibly one of the best bad games i've ever played, and i mean that in total good will. for a first game, this is great, especially the art, which far outshines everything else. the writing is very linear and doesnt make a whole load of sense (typo's, random words,inconsistent grammar or unfinished sentances) , taking its self way too seriously for something so edgy/cheesy, which gives it some extra charm and personality. the same can be said for the story, but again, it builds up some personality it would miss out on otherwise.
its a an unpolished mess, but god, its enjoyable. looking forward to chapter 2 + other projects :)