i wish I'd found this VN sooner!!
I'm late to all this shit and it's so frustrating. All these beautiful stories, beautiful art, and even more beautiful characters! It's so overwhelming, then I saw they're was a Lyall plushie, FML!! I'd have been all over that. He kinda reminds me of my corgi Taco 🌮. Atmac, you have a great story on your hands, one worthy of a proper animated movie, cartoon, or even just a comic if I'm being honest. We need more love stories and romance novels for us gay guys, and yours is perfect 👌.
Oh, I have to say, nice to see another guy in the long haired club 👍. Had mine for almost 15yrs now and my only regret is not doing it sooner. I could tell from the story you, or someone on your team was a "long-hair" by the way you described how it falls when you take your shirt off, how it lays when you sleep, how Lyall washed Richters, someone knows how nasty it can get 😉 and how amazing it is when you wash that all away, etc. How well you described the feel, texture and scent of Lyall's, it adds so much more to his character design and to the more intimate scenes as it adds something else to describe. It's all just so fuckin great. The attention to Lyall's armor, both types is just amazing, I had to play through a few times just to notice more details. Sorry I'm rambling, but I get that way when I'm excited 😊