I don’t see the discussion forum enabled, so I hope it’s ok to provide feedback and questions in a comment.
A Chase:
- it asks you to “throw”, but it never really explains what a throw is before this. One can infer it’s a coin toss, but it might be worth mentioning the lingo in Conducting the Chase.
- Ending the Chase says “After a total of four challenges and admissions” - is that 4 of each, or 4 total?
- If the hunter wins, are you supposed to fully resolve the outcome, or leave it as a cliffhanger?
An Oblique Discussion:
- this specifically uses Scandal Tokens instead of coins used in other places. It might be better just to use coins here, saying they represent scandal.
Stealing Time Together:
- a player may interrupt after the 3rd exchange, OR may choose to flip a coin after ANY exchange. I don’t know why, but it feels strange to have both of these rules at the same time
I didn’t do a side by side comparison with Firebrands or anything here, these are just notes taken on a full read-through.