Oh that's so weird, I don't know why that would happen, unless it's because there are many images in that scene and it might crash the game sometimes... I'll find a way to reduce the number of images if that's the case!
Criticism is appreciated! I'm here to improve the game however I can, thanks for the feedback! I was thinking of adding a tutorial for the controls, I will add info in the page for the full game as well as adding a little sign that tells you the basic controls, but I do want to encourage the player to explore in their own, reading all the dialogue isn't necessary but encouraged.
Noted! I added the first save tutorial before the button, I can see how it might be a bit frustating to not know about it before so it's not too big of a change.
The in/on thing is because English is not my first language and for the life of me I never know which one I'm supposed to use lol I have a pretty good level of English but in/on is my one weakness, I'm so bad it, so I'm sorry for that I don't think that's going to improve much later on lol
Thanks for trying the demo, giving me good feedback and your wishes to play the full game! Have a good day!