Consider this as a random dude's review.
I am very new to the scene(gamedev as a whole) and the psychological horror genre.
But, the effects seem nice and clean. The transitions are fluid. Pretty sure the delay in registering the click is a feature(not a bug).
I think it could have some sort of open buildup or backstory for making it more theme friendly to 'beyond death'.
Looking forward to what you do next with this project.