Really cute story, can't wait to read more!
I really like the artstyle, it has a certain child-like, creative charm to it. I like how colorful it is, and I love how the main cast looks! One of the only VNs where I like the appearance of all the main cast haha (Thanzo especially <3 dope design). I also can't believe you seem to be making sprites for all of the side characters, especially the ones who only show up for a short segment. I imagine its quite an undertaking, and while its definitely not needed, its appreciated for sure, and helped the world feel more alive :)
Going to check on this VN from time to time for sure. Keep up the great work!