I'm so grateful for this new chapter! I just finished reading it and it's always the same feedback from me : 20/10 it's P-e-r-f-e-c-t. Something else I want to say is that I can't wait for brother cloud to be back (to be honest Im still confused if he's alive or dead). One other thing that kinda annoyed me a tiny bit is the random FLASHBANGS, I was reading this during the night and it flashbanged me so many times ;-; (but don't worry the backgrounds gave it a realistic experience).
Anyways I'm really happy about this chapter! ( I even changed my PFP with Tex ^-^) The new outfits and characters are so nice and well written too!! I bet chapter 5 is going to be awsome. (Might have some spelling mistakes ;P)