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yo I had a play of your game! please remember that all I say is supportive criticism to help give some ideas to improve the game a bit more.

first off there's a decent narrative, we are introduced to two characters with a mysterious story left to be found out. the character designs are excellent and I love the transition from her with an empty stomach to full.

although the problems I feel are that the situational scenes go by a bit fast. it could do with some more writing in certain scenes to add more depth instead of what feel like a minute or less. I feel like a few more faces could be made in the future as it is a little strange to see them always smiling. maybe even a slight change in pose would be nice (arm behind head sort of thing).

as a demo of sort I really enjoyed this I would rate it an 7.5/ 10. I can see the future for this game and its looking good. a bit more work and you really got something here! hope you have a wonderful day mate I'm glad I got to test your game 😁

Thanks for your feedback, I'll make it better 😉