Concepts & Originality 3/5
The story is interesting and very evocative. There just doesn't seem to be anything tying it to the OPR setting as opposed to any other 18th or 19th century/gothic horror story.
Flow & Clarity 4/5
The story is well written, with a fairly clear narrative and distinct narrator voice that fits the story well. I didn't notice any mistakes or typos that interrupted the flow of the prose.
Adherence to Theme 5/5
The story seems to adhere to the theme well. Well done.
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