The artwork is good, and Zen is pretty hot. ^_^
I wonder if he's from a caveman-like planet with a honor culture or something... *ponders* He's weirdly upset over something so silly as someone disrespecting you.
Or is that more of an overprotective lover thing?
I'm not a super-fan of sci-fi but this is pretty good.
I'm a little sad he doesn't have long hair when it is common for his people.
(But that's just my preference in men. lol)
His jealousy is a bit annoying tho.
I mean, since he's bothering you with it, instead of just kicking the ass of the guy he's jealous off.
But I realize that'd be hard for him, so I suppose I see why he doesn't. lol
(And I guess some people like that behavior. I've never really understood jealousy myself, so what do I know.)
His possessiveness is cute tho. ^_^
LOVE the translation errors. lol
Overall it's a nice story.
(Loved that there was NSFW content! ^_^ )
And I really loved that you had a choice at the very end of where to go and stuff.