I like the characters. Tho it would be nice if they were love interests, and it sounded from what the page says that romance isn't going to be a big thing in the game. But I guess it remains to be seen.
Not a fan of the artstyle, and especially not the way the chat-boxes are placed. It's very chaotic.
But the story and writing itself makes up for it.
It is positively professional level, as far as I can tell.
(And the art style isn't bad in itself. It's just not a style I personally like for a game. Especially the lack of colors.)
The single biggest flaw in this "game" is a complete lack of choices.
So far I haven't seen a single one, which makes it more of a novel (or comic book) than an actual game.
There REALLY should be a warning somewhere for that.
I think think the...whatever this is... has potential to be a good game, with a very interesting plot to it. IF it had a decent amount of choices in it.