I can say for sure that between all games submitted that I've played for this jam - this is absolutely my favorite. It feels like a really nice demo which reminded me of Distraint. Played both the endings and the theme interpretation is nice. I only wish it would last longer. It was that good that I wanted to continue playing, awesome job. Understandably, given the time frame you did best you could but in the end where the "ending story" was, would wish for more visuals and interactions but even with this approach you managed to create an immersive game and thats the main thing I loved about the game. Art, SFX & music were executed perfectly IMHO. Especially the audio part was giving such a nice immersion. Another thing I can mention is great font selection. Readable & fitting. That is one of my main comments for other games that either there is a default font that usually doesn't fit or it is barely readable. Massive kudos to the team for amazing work, I really enjoyed the game!
UPD: Possible small UX improvement that could be added is keeping the objective visible at all times. You already have great transitions and show the objective "loud & clear" but then it fades away. Maybe instead of fading it could be minimized and stuck somewhere at the corner just so that the player can always get a glimpse of what is the objective ? Like a small non intrusive note.