Okay, I finished playing the game—it's quite short. Here’s my honest feedback:
Things move too quickly for such a short story.
I dislike that my choices mean literally nothing. I wanted to slow things down, but Aria overrode all my decisions and did whatever she wanted.
I particularly dislike the extreme promiscuity Aria engages in within such a short time frame.
Additionally, I believe you could extend the story by adding more details to key moments. For example, during the truth-or-dare scene, there was just one dare, and she kissed the guy right away. That felt rushed.
The moment she goes to suck the other guy's dick for the first time—doing it while he was asleep—felt odd. He wasn’t even given the option to wake up, follow her, eavesdrop on what she was doing, or just ask her to stop.
One thing I’d really love to see is more build-up.
Right now, the tension feels artificial, not real. Even though the dialogue tells you it’s there, the pacing doesn’t support it properly. There are too few details before, during, and after the hot scenes.
That said, those are my only complaints. You’re doing an incredible job—being so careful and consistent with the art style, adding so many renders to make the story feel more animated.
The mobile phone popping up? Such a great detail. And the fact that, in the future, the MC will be able to move between rooms suggests you're planning something well-thought-out regarding spying on the MC's girlfriend. I can’t wait to see what you’re cooking up.
Dude, you have a lot of talent, and your attention to detail is one of your strongest skills. God, I’d love to work with people like you—those with such a sharp eye for every little detail.
So, if you can add proper build-up, fix the pacing, give more time to the hot scenes, and make the player's choices actually matter—not just in a way where not following Aria’s wishes results in missing out and making the game boring—that would make a world of difference.
Keep it up! I’ve decided to start supporting you on Patreon.