The artwork is nice. Very interesting design.
And the story is very interesting as well.
But I feel like the story lacks a proper conclusion, because in the end, we know nothing more than we did at the start.
Who is the mc? Are they a part of the mind that was just stolen from?
Why are they there? How did they get there? Shouldn't they be in their own mind in the real world or something?
Essentially: What the heck is going on? oO