This is lovely and I think it has a lot of potential. I personally apreciate the soft coloring and appearance of the game rigth now, even if I know it will get updated (I mean, Theo is stunning in this version haha), but generally, it just looks so beautiful and I love the forget-me-nots.
Oh, and I loved the music, I think with visual novels we sometimes forget about sound, but I think you made some excellent choices there. I mean, when I opened the game and heard birds singing I knew it was a good start.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the fun, the horror and the cuteness!
Thank you for sharing your work with us and please take care.