Well, it's an interesting start so far, I definitely like the little twist when speakin' to Dean Franklin about "Gary". Other than that, I enjoyed the graphics for what little was there, probably would have looked a bit better if the models were maybe 2x's bigger in the battle screen, but it's a'ight as is.
I got stuck however, when I went down the staircase on the right it was just a black screen. I could move around though because as I was able to get back out of that screen by just pressin' WASD... So I'm not sure if there was anything more after that.
Again, a fine start, has some intriguing aspects about it that I would like to see more down the line if you are ever to continue. Good job.