I'll help you out. "your are" should be "you're", "pleace" should be "please". Make sure to add " ' " to words.
The VN, was never 18+ the way you're thinking. A character had umf umf behind the scenes. Nothing shown, so stop acting like this was some Eternum show.
Comparing a game, and real-life actually makes sense in most cases. In the game, there is a relationship, in real-life there is a relationship... Now if I were to say, Rocket League has rocket-boosting flying cars playing soccer, why doesn't IRL have that? It's just obvious that there's a difference between reality, and not.
Hope you have a good one, vj13008.