I really like the orchestration on this track, and I think you did an excellent job producing it with the tools you had available! My one primary nitpick is that the staccato and pizzicato strings were a bit too strong in the mix and somewhat took away from the atmosphere of the background rather than supporting it. I would recommend quieting them a bit and adding a bit of reverb, and as letina suggested, adding some variety to the quantization to create a more natural feeling. With that being said, I think the vibe you captured ultimately resonates very well with the theme and the vision you were trying to achieve, A great job, and I look forward to your future works! :)