I think that this game has shown a lot of promise and am looking forward to the future updates! I'm a big fan of the art style and would have to agree with other players that the change in style when playing Vivi's sex scene is a bit jarring. I also felt the scene could do a better job of matching the character's personality. For example, use of ropes or other BDSM type gear in the scene would serve to better differentiate her from other characters. Additionally, a line or two of dialogue commenting on the player's size would be a nice touch now that the player can customize their member.
I had some ideas for quality of life improvements and some gameplay comments:
- The racing minigame should allow the player to bet in increments larger than $20 or to simply go all in. Once the player gets to $1000+ bets and is clicking 50+ times to wager that much, it becomes uncomfortable and time-consuming. A solution might be to allow the player to type in the wagered amount instead.
- When multiple girls' routes are capable of being advanced at the same time, you should be able to receive one package per character per day. There were many in-game days (over 30) where I would do three chores, deliver a package, and then sleep the rest of the day to wait for the next package. This turned a process that might have taken 10-15 in-game days into one that takes around 40-50.
- Health/energy related items should not cost the player as much as a camera would or even more than the $1000 night vision camera. If the goal is to limit the consumption of these items, consider making these things cheaper but with a daily limit so that they are not abusable.
- With the ability to save and load, overtime is just objectively worse than gambling as a way to accrue money (unless you are playing scratchers lol). Most of the overtime minigames are fun enough to play a few times but feel repetitive and too time-consuming for the player to consider as a long-term way of making money. A fixed amount of money could be granted for completing an abbreviated form of the minigame to avoid having the player spend literal hours playing them.
- If you save while a camera is being installed and then load the save, the camera permanently disappears from your inventory while still being listed.