Hot guy.
But chest-hair....yuck!
(Body-hair in general: yuck.)
But each to their own I suppose...
He's a little trigger-happy with showing his true self tho.
Most people would wait until they've secured the love of the person they want before doing that. Least they scare them away.
Would YOU share your darkest side with someone who doesn't truly know you or care for you?
(And it makes for a better story as well when they do, allowing the MC to grapple with the slightly scary fact, and questioning what she thought she knew about him.)
I also notice they get intimate way too fast, and you never get a choice to say yes or no.
I realize that it is the premise of the game, but I still prefer a choice.
And moving THAT quickly removes any chance of suspense or sexual tension --not to mention it blind-sights you as it comes out of nowhere.
I've seen this in (bad) fanfiction, but never in a visual novel.
Not to this degree at least.
Is there some word limit that pushed the rushed part of the story or something?
It's a hot, but short story.
It's not a bad story in and of itself, but it feels rushed.
I think it would have been better if it was longer, and the romance more dragged out and natural.