The mechanics are okay, the drawing is yours (I suppose). It would need just a little bit more formatting and it’s all good, if the game had some distinct setting.
The illustration invokes the travel in the far east, Japan maybe. Maybe you could enhance the theme by throwing in some words, your hometown perhaps?
If I counted correctly, you still have two spare words. Two words are enough to introduce new mechanic.
Drink tea. Fight demons. Confront travelers. Help strangers.
Anything goes.