The writing feels so natural, and got me invested really quick, great job!
Very much looking forward to updates
I love that Natalie feels like a real person, the fact that people get busy and living their lives, it's not just game centred around the MC creating a harem. I'm most excited to follow her path and see how the relationship develops. I would love if the conversation has a bit more emphasis on the fact that MC hasn't done this before and so it's written in a way that more slowly nad deliberately introduces MC into trying more new things (Which is already happening, just want to make sure it stays consistent). Natalie is definitely the character I'd love to see get the most content out of her and Madison so far
Madison again feels like a real person who is very forward with what she wants and that being the reason why she's divorced, i really like that angle. future interactions with her will definitely be interesting (Maybe interactions around work to show that the nature of the relationship reaches further than the bedroom, that could be very fun)
Only thing i found a bit strange is that the work map felt very empty (But i'm assuming that will fill out later through future releases, so this isn't a biggie)
Again, I love the care you're putting into this to make everyone feel real rather than an MC harem power fantasy, kudos! Following with continued interest