I like the concept of this, and the writing isn't bad either.
The artwork could benefit from some improvement, but I've seen worse.
The REAL problem is that choices do not matter one whit.
And there is ONLY ONE ending.
Which you end up with regardless of what choice you make.
I can see how it may be meant as an intro to the real game, but it's still pretty annoying to not have any choices that makes a real difference.
So until the choices start to matter I'm gonna label this as a 'novel', not a game. Because games have choices. That matter.
(And ideally also changes how it ends.)