I loved every second of this game.
First off, huge congratulations on such a beautiful game! The story is so captivating, it pulls you in and makes you want to keep reading non-stop. And the quality of the 3D renders/sprites is amazing. I checked out both the draft and the revamp, and honestly, even the draft has incredible quality.
I started with the revamp, but I couldnāt wait, so I switched to the draft because I just had to keep following the story. The character development, how everyone deals with their own challenges, and just the whole vibe of the game really blew me away.
This game went way beyond what I expected. I totally agree that stories like this benefit from having explicit/NSFW elements, it really helps express the story and character development better. A lot of the time, these things get left out, but they actually make the story feel deeper, not just for shock value, but because they make it more real. Itās like youāre reading something that couldāve actually happened to someone, with all the messy, raw details included. Honestly, I think more stories should do this. Iām pretty sure Iāll be revisiting this one again soon.
One thing Iād love to suggest is adding more languages to the story, besides English. I get that itās not realistic to translate the whole script into every language overnight lol, thatād be a massive task, but having options would make it easier for non-native English speakers to enjoy the story fully. Like for me, Iām a Spanish speaker, and while I was able to follow the story in English, I know Iād enjoy it even more in my own language. Just throwing the idea out there! I saw something about this on Discord a while ago, and if you ever consider it, Iād be happy to volunteer to help :)
To wrap it up, congratulations again on such an amazing game/story. When I get the chance, Iāll definitely be supporting this project financially!