Hey, sorry for getting to this so late, but I'm really glad I got to play it. Was a really fun premise and vibe, and I'd say you are well on the way to nailing it. Needs work on the background art (the sides of the level etc) and could do with more explanation on what to do and where to go etc, but I thought it was a great idea, really funny premise and had fun playing so that's a win for me. The capsule art is hilarious, I think it's okay to make games for adults to play and have a laugh at, I know some people will inevitably be offended by that, so could put him in his undies or whatever, but tbh it's a selling point and it is funny :D
Great work, especially in such a short time.