Felt in debt for playing without paying so sharing my thoughts is the least i could do. Basically, love the way the story builds up, there are flaws but it's good. It really has the potential to become great. Hope you continue to work on this. cheers!
Hey thanks. I agree with you on the flaws. I just started a reread and I cant believe how bad the beginning is written...def have come a long way. But on a more serious note, dropping me a note is def appreciated. U dont have to pay or anything like that. I appreciate the feedback and just knowing you enjoyed it...that goes a lot further than a few bucks does. <3