Hi there! I enjoyed this latest update. I very much enjoyed getting away from the Carnations Club and seeing a little more of the rest of the city.
I thought the whole 'Victoria's Dark Secret' story was quite well done. I could feel Edwin's conflict and his pain. I went with trying to put the past behind them for good myself.
I screwed up a little with my 'Hana is the BAE' game though and will need to redo it to get the latest solo Hana scene... But she's totally worth it.
I really liked seeing Mina start to get a little jealous and possessive in my 'Mina is the BAE' game though. I think she will eventually request full GF privileges, which I will happily have Edwin grant her.
My one real complaint about your work is that this update took about 9 months to come out and that is an awfully long time. I really hope that the next release will be quicker and that you guys are doing your best to get that Dev time down...