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not bad some decent ideas , the writing felt really rigid , characters speed  needed to be a bit faster , having space pause the game is a input that does not translate well  for players , enemies needed some more life to them ,  its decent but the writing was the 1 thing that i could not really get into at all  just some constructive feedback 

Hey and thanks for playing and for your comment. Constructive feedbacks is all I ask and it is one thank you. But what do you exactly mean by "the writing" ? The scenario ? Or the way writings appear on screen ?