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I really liked this game, the art is amazing and the characters are rlly fun and interesting! LITERALLY CANT WAIT FOR THE FULL GAME TO COME OUT. My only criticism of this game is the MC we play as, they're kind of like a doormat kind of character and even the options which they do get a little mouthy  but still kind of recluse back to that state again. THIS ISN'T MEANT TO SOUND LIKE IM HATING I LOVE THIS GAME. I just think the dialogue options for the MC are very....help idk how to describe it but they MC is basically an easy target. Like even when they say "Do I look like a technician to you?" They still fix the AC for Rasmus, LIKE GIRL NOOOO. 

Or when hes harassing them girly doesn't do or say ANYTHING. Not saying  the MC has to tell someone to kill themselves js bc they called them a loser  but it would be  nice to have more mcs who can read a bitch that has an attitude for filth, because period. (YOU DONT HAVE TO CHANGE IT IF U DONT WANT TO OFC!, its ur game!) Or less of someone who says "They're so quiet and unfriendly" about other people. AGAIN I LOVE THIS GAME, THE ART IS AMAZING THE CHARACTER DESIGNS LOOK REALLY GOOD, YOU DID AMAZING WITH THIS GAME AND I CANT WAIT FOR IT TO COME OUT. The storyline is well written and so interesting! I love that it doesn't immediately start exposition or lore dumping the minute you start playing like how a lot of other games do, and I love that you can choose a lot of your dialog options, esp in the first part of the game. I also really like that the MC actually has a personality, it makes them relatable and actually shows why someone would like them. Cause I notice in a lot of visual novels, usually with the male mcs they have ZERO personality, or is just one report away from being on the sex offenders list, yet all of the love interest(s) fall for them, and its like how did you even THINK about wanting that man in your life baby? SO I LOVE that you gave them a personality. I also really love how depending on what you choose to do  after Rasmus(sorry if I got his name wrong) Changes your fate and who you end up with!

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Thank you so much for your comment, it helps a lot <3

Yep, this is by design. MC is aware of the different power dynamic between them and Rasmus. He's the son of the manager after all - one word from him and MC could get fired. So they try their best not to overdo it with the "bitchy" attitude. But! With each new chapter, MC can gradually become more feisty or even ruthless if you want to. This could be part of your roleplay later if you want to develop your MC into growing more backbone :) 

I also prefer giving MC a bit of a personality (and background), it's more fun to write it that way ^^

Thanks again and have a nice week!

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OMG I CANT BELIEVE YOU RESPONDED TYSM AND IM SO EXCITED TO SEE YOUR GAME COME OUT YOU HAVE A NICE WEEK TOO