The new chapter was so good!! Absolutely love the new explicit scenes tbh my MC enjoys seeking fun so I'm quite satisfied 🤭 I actually like Jun a lot, he was so cute and hot like damn can we meet again 🤣 Also it was nice to finally meet Rune, he was nicer and more interesting than I expected him to be. Aster was a pleasant surprise! Ngl he's so sus, like I'm 100% skeptical about him and yet I can't help but be into him LOL He got this dangerous and mysterious thing going on and I like it 😳 Thanks for the update, it was a delight to play!! Looking forward to chapter 6 🫶
I am so glad you liked it! Jun was a joy to write, I feel like plucking him from this world and plopping him as a RO in another, lol. Rune is a character I've felt is better experienced than explained, so I'm happy they were a pleasant surprise for you. And 100% cannot fault you for finding Aster a little sus, lol (someone on Tumblr affectionately calls him ASSter and I really feel that). ^_^
Your writing is so fire ❤️🔥 I'm so invested in this game. Every character feels so different and alive which helps with the story immersion. The main thing I like is how flexible the choices are for MC's personality, like it feels great not to be forced to act in a certain way just bcoz it's the default setting for MC. My MC feels like her own person and I love it. (Also love how everyone is charmed by MC's beauty HAHA kinda Mary Sue but I absolutely love being charming so well done!!)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you mentioned the personality system because I'm currently wondering if I should stick with it for my next IF or try something new. I think the method in GC has been the favored one though. LOL MC is a bit Mary Sue (Mary Cue? MC - :D - I'll stop), but one you can put through a meat grinder. (this might be mentioned in the game too at some point, lol)
The personality system is great! One thing I noticed is that when it comes to romance options, it either leans towards being super shy or being rlly bold. Maybe you could consider making the choices, from time to time, like shy but not too much / flirtatious but more subtle? I think that would be nice but ofc it's already rlly good, I like it 😌🤌 Also, Mary Sue MCs are my absolute favs bcoz why wouldnt i HAHA I need my MCs to be great characters that are significant to the story 🫶 So thanks for this! Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to continue playing this wonderful game!
I'm glad you like it! I have considered altering the romance system as well. I initially vetoed the more in-between actions since the personality system doesn't use a middle-ground option either (saves me a lot of coding and struggling to find an in-between option that feels natural). But the personality extremes can still kinda pass sometimes for a middle-ground response - they just don't feel as uniquely "this or that" to me. It wouldn't be too difficult to add another flirting method either. I'll do some thinking on it! Thank you, my dear! I can't wait to see how this project grows. ^_^