This game was absolute perfection!! My 10 year old and I love all of your games, and this was just beautifully made. The story was very poignant as well, reminiscent of a true life tragedy that took place a long time ago, where 3 men broke into a home and set the wife and children on fire, and left the poor husband to come home and find his family dead, his home burned to the ground.
i have two suggestions, however, and you can take them with a grain of salt, as i am a middle aged housewife with no computer experience....the "yes/no" feature was a bit tedious, as was the inventory, but other than that? perfect.
also, you should HIGHLY consider incorporating music by Arvo Part into your games, specifically his pieces such as salve regina and the magnificat, i feel that they would go well.
anyway, GREAT JOB, young man!! please keep it up! :}