Descend into a region to destroy a dangerous robot
This review is after only reading the mission. A decent mission with the main attractions being the infiltration/attack of a dilapidated fortress followed by a rampaging robot. The stats of the Killing machine seem like they would make a fun encounter
It was fairly clear however I was a bit confused as to the relative locations of the fortress and Mercy. I assumed The fortress was in Mercy but it then says later on it is easy to get from the fortress to Mersey as the gatehouse will be open.
The wiring is clear and I had no questions left unanswered. However, I felt it could have been a little more concise and evocative.
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STYLE: 4/5, Killer sleeper bot in a dilapidated region is cool but visual presentation is ok.
SUBSTANCE 4/5: The Killing machine encounter seems the highlight of the show, followed by the fortress infiltration/attack. However, the writing could be improved and I found it tends to over explain things (which I find easy to do when writing missions/settings too).