Post by butchland in [ ! ] Mid-jam Playtesting [Sat-Mon]

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Game Title/URL: Snowflake in the Wind/ Playable here

Pitch/Information:

You are a snowflake floating on the wind, looking for a snowman to land on.

Click (or tap on mobile) anywhere on the screen to nudge the snowflake as it floats up and down. Avoid the pine trees. Guide it towards a waving Snowman as you float past the snow cloud flurries.

NOTE: It takes a while to load so be patient.

I’d like feedback on:

* Improving the game art.

* Improving the game play.

* Anything else you can think of.

* If you think it sucks, I'd appreciate it if you tell me and why (I have a thick skin, so don't worry about hurting my feelings :D)

I need help on:

* An artist who can help improve the game assets.

* Sound effects/Background music?

* Game design - help me improve the game play.

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knubbilito4 years ago(+1)

Hi butchland, I tried your game and it looks like a good idea. One thing that was a little hard in the beginning was to see the play button(It's just as white as the snow).

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butchland4 years ago

Thanks for the feedback. I’ll definitely try to get the buttons stand out more.

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MindlessRuff4 years ago

I had some difficulties understanding the controls. Some sort of indication to the player on how to control the snowflake would be very beneficial.

The game art actually looks very good! Only strange thing was that some of the clouds seemed like part of the ground, I guess it is meant to be a mountain high up in the sky which would make more sense.

As far as music goes if you have the time and inspiration you could always find some melody making tutorials on YouTube and put your own spin on it. Otherwise find some royalty free sound and use that.

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butchland4 years ago

Thanks for the feedback. I will definitely try to figure out a way to make how the controls work in the game better.

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