Let me check it. Well I like the ambience tho some music in background won't hurt. From jukebox or live band... Some scenery change. Improve the font/color or change the tile floor color bc both melt into white and sometimes it's hard to read. Or place the dialogue field somewhere else. Some keyboard control when it comes to dialogue line selection and highlight the active one.
I like that bouncing ball/dot there and fade in scenery change. Did you get that bar ambience yourself or downloaded? Is it going to be a dating/erotic/porn/adventure point&click game or rather random encounters and events like some brawls/con men and all bar world different situations you can imagine? And those pauses - i'd add "..." or "continue" or "go on" bc while for some ppl it might be a cliffhanger before hitting space again some might find it as a bug or game freeze hm...
About accepting new members there's kinda loop until i hit LMB. Cool animation transitions in the background too. I can see some private climax in the background. The ambience fade out has too much attack. It's good not to recognize it's been looped. That's what great background ambience is about.
That being said, it should have rather slow fade in/out volume transition so it won't feel artificial. I like the script, it's pretty sophisticated, subtle and chill like both of tired ppl who know some about life. Found a typo "Infact" but don't worry. Everybody makes mistakes especially while WIP projects stage u don't rly care about such tiny details at the beginning. Is that line a glitch in the bottom. It's happening after buying a drink https://gyazo.com/18ab9664f5bd6d2ac2671d1270260919 . Or it's the end of the game so far? Anyway I pretty much enjoyed!