Right... well this was... uh-uh. So firstly, game or not the second one, Shotgun Massacre? That was just disgusting. There is zero context, in fantasy or real life, that makes that okay. You came up with three original stories, why couldn't you do that for Shotgun Massacre? We could have been at a mall, or a park or SOMETHING.
And second, no offence intended, but you really need a native English speaker to go over your text. Some parts were just painful to read and down right confusing. Very first example that comes to mind is when you first meet John (How it's supposed to be spelled, by the way). The in-game text is "Good night Thomas, My name is Jhon Rubrick and I came here to bring the world of God to you."
While that is... fine, it could use a bit of refinement. That sentence should read as: "Evening, Thomas. My name is John Ruberick, and I'm here to bring you the word of God."
So yeah... A fine game for the price, but the English needs a LOT of work and the mock Columbine Shooting was just disgusting and in really poor taste.