For a prototype build this VN has some intriguing world building ideas that left me curious to learn more about the setting and direction that the plot would take.
The current build is quite rough however, and suffers from a fair bit of copy editing issues in the form of typos and inconsistent capitalization. There’s also a certain awkwardness to the narration, which endeavours to pack in a lot of exposition about the setting while leaving more immediate details unstated. As an example, the narration goes into some detail about the origins of its post apocalyptic setting without clearly establishing how much time has passed since the collapse of the old civilization.
These issues aside, there are good foundations for a plot and setting here, and what art, sprites, and music are present in this early build all fit the narrative and game well. There’s lots of potential here.