I just wanted to say I really loved this vn. The characters, the story, the setting- it's all great. In fact, I loved it so much I went through and made a list of all the edits/fixes I thought of while reading through with explanations + I made a little review at the bottom.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kTnuu3XrreYdI2NhIb9yPYIwLAz9W38PqUZ_avw9hdA/...