Thank you so much for the feedback, I'm glad that you found your read enjoyable. I have really loved doing this project and trying to fit in things that I would want to see while reading IFs. My goal is to make those facets of your character feel as real as possible while trying to avoid ham-fisting it. When I get a spot of time to sit down and clean up the first few chapters (definitely going to hit the grammar hard then too), I want to add a bit more customization and refine what is already there. If you have ideas for additions, I happily take suggestions. If you prefer, you can pop them into the error report form instead. It's linked in the game. ^_^