The Dialogue is just goated; the 6 person's phone call was hilarious, and never had I expected a skeleton at a strip club to drop lines of this caliber:
"I may not have a beating heart like you, but I can still feel empathy for those who need it, compassion for those who suffer, and understanding for those facing challenges. And that's all that matters in the end."
Keep it up; it may pass unnoticed because people who want compelling dialogues do not seek visual novels (at least, I think they don't since this is the first I have read). However, it's no small feat and contributes as much to the product as the animations themselves.