the scenes have a nice rhythm to them and the 'find the egg' scene, up until actually finding the egg (because it looks a little silly), was stimulating for its short run, but I'm not sure if the game adds up to much for me. it's a plausible narrative, unfortunately close to the lived experiences of many, but the storytelling and presentation here don't feel rich or detailed enough to provoke a response beyond "this is sad."
Thank you so much for taking the time to play my game and for sharing such detailed feedback! I'm really glad you found the scenes to have a good rhythm and enjoyed the ‘find the egg’ sequence (that scene was my favorite while making). Your point about the game’s storytelling and presentation not quite resonating deeply enough is definitely something I’ll keep in mind moving forward. Thanks again!