Alrighty!
I've been playing ren'py VNs for a good long while now ever since I picked up my first one I think nearly a decade ago now. I love how each and every one of them have a unique setting, lore, and diverse cast of NPCs you can sleep with.
Yours has all of this and more in spades! I was addicted to the plot and figuring out the right choices to make these girls happy. I enjoy Anya a lot and Jane is an absolute stone cold fox. I hope to see more of this game in the future! Take your time developing it and crafting the story to be as fun and as entertaining as you want it to be!