This game is truly amazing. While is pretty much just a "hey read this book I wrote" rather than having choices, the story itself is amazing and I genuinely felt emotions for the characters which is rare. As of 0.10.1, it had around 10-12 hrs of content at my reading speed (which I admit I was so hooked I lost my Saturday) but the variations in scenes, situations, and characters was amazing.
There were a few things that I would like to see improved some of which I don't know are in the author's control.
1. The elbows on these characters look like someone roughed them with sandpaper. I could see why the MC would have this but all the girls having it too drew me out a few times. I think it's a base model thing so honestly not sure what can be done about it but I don't think I've really seen other games with this...feature?
2. It might be coming in the future but it would be nice to see variations in pubic hair and some more medium chested girls. If I remember correctly, everyone is shaved and girls by and large have extremely voluminous bosoms with a couple small but...I may be in the minority on this one as a lot of erotic games tend to have nothing but large. Kinda like shopping for shirts and there are only small or x-large but nothing in between.