I thought the writing on this was very cute and charming, especially the *you're part lol. It might be fun to play with the styling. I love the cozy orange color, but maybe that can be saved for indoor sections (beginning and home) and the screen gets cooler as you get colder? I think it might add to the coziness of the indoor sections and harshness of the outdoor ones. I appreciated the little text styling tidbits you used like with the street directions as well! The art added a lot and helped visualize your surroundings and break up the block of text. I just went home and had yummy stew and didn't freeze into a cube. Great job!