It was short 'n' sweet and to the point, I enjoyed it! Obviously it was really hand-holdy, but you know that, and I don't think that's necessarily bad when you have a specific story you want to tell. I didn't understand what the 'coincidence' was meant to be, but I didn't hold it against it much, it was enjoyable :) Keep making stuff!!
Lumps Plays is 100% visual and utilizes pop-up commentary to provide consistent viewing whether you're hearing, deaf, at work, in a loud place, or simply just don't wanna listen to youtubers ramble and chant "uhm."