Sorry to say it but I think this is a poorly written AVN. I am referring mostly to the 'choices'. I don't think the script really reflects them, so I don't think they are real choices.
Most of the time I chose not to romance the girls in this AVN, I wanted to pursue just the one girl (Ash). Yet the story seems to be written with the assumption that the MC is taking every opportunity to pursue all of the girls...
For example: I had the option of making the MC kiss Orisse's neck right? I chose not to do it, because she isn't Ash. Yet moments later Nick talks about it happening...
This sort of thing happens several times... Another example: I didnt get on the train earlier on and therefore did not meet those gang member chicks, let alone have a lewd with them. I know its meant to happen though because one of those girls turns up later and the MC acknowledges it happened... Even though it never did!
The other thing that really annoys me about this AVN is that the MC is portrayed as almost completely useless, he keeps getting beaten in fights even after he won that Arena tournament. His allies keep getting outplayed, often by one guy (Gustav owned like 5 people, including the MC) and the whole thing is used to make another character look awesome... while making the MC utterly useless!
I mean a professional hitman gets outmaneuvered and surprised by common thugs!
This sort of thing is just tired. Either have the MC just be useless or allow him to have some consistent value here! And if he is useless then just kill him off already!! It's frustrating!
Also Filo is the most frustrating, annoying, bitchy Tsundere ever and I hate her!! The only reason I am still reading this AVN is in the hope I can tell her to piss off!
Anyways, just my 2 cents.