lovely story! The angst and turmoil is so well written
just a small opinion: chapters 4 and 5 feels like the game is pushing Elaine onto you too hard, forcing you to be interested and befriend her even if it’s not romantic. It’s either spend time with Elaine or pages and pages of info dump, it’s kinda boring for players that have no interest in her. It would be great to have more of the other ROs as option to hang out, or even some other characters.