After reading your intention and knowing about the auction part of your story, I was surprised and pleased with the turn to outdoor action and chase scenes. Moving from the bidding into a totally different type of story with (SPOILER) an option to beat up an elderly woman was funny and made me giggle. The Loop Ending is also very smart, leaning into replayability…I wish it had a button to return to the beginning though, instead of just saying “feel free to start over” - you could connect it directly back to the Collingwood Art Auction passage!
Great work!